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Life Cut Short
Edward Elric x Reader
Ed held you in his arms, His breathing quick, A trail of blood running down the side of his head down to his neck, Disappearing down his blood stained shirt.
He leaned his head against yours with gritted teeth as he held back his tears,
He was losing you, Fast.
Your half lidded (e/c) eyes look up slowly to meet his Gold ones. You smile as he put a hand on his head weakly as you finally had the air to breathe, It was becoming harder to breathe as the blood slowly started to fill your lungs, you cough a little before managing to speak. “Ed, D-don’t look so sad…It’s no big deal…” you say as he cough again, this time crimson wetness coating the palm of your hand.
He shook his head as a pained look filled his eyes. “No, (Y/n) this is a big deal…I-I can’t lose you…!!!” He cried as he held you closer to him; He wanted to help but…He couldn’t, the closest doctor was miles away, You wouldn’t make it.
Edward Elric and You had been through everything together, You were his friend, His traveling companion (Besides Al), And most of all…His Crush.
He had loved you for what seemed like forever, This was the first time he could hold you in his arms without blushing or nose bleeding...
This was one battle; One mission you weren’t going to finish. The last time you’d see Ed. The Last Time You Would See Life.
You were scared, Scared to die, But you couldn’t let Ed see it…You had to show him you were brave…Show him that there was no reason to cry, Even if there was.
He squeezes his eyes shut as tears well up at the corners of his eyes. “T-this wasn’t supposed to happen…! I-its all my fault…(Y/n) Please fo-forgive me…” He whispered as his face darkened. “I-I love you…I-I always have…We were supposed to get married and have kids, W-we’d live in a big house and d-die there….T-together…!” He cried as he hugged your blushing, Weakening body close to his warm one.
You swallowed down the lump in your throat as you hugged him back, as tears finally dripped down from your own eyes. “I-i…L---“ You cough roughly into your hand. “I love you….Too Ed…Don’t cry…” You pause for a moment as you know your time is running out.
“I’m Sorry…Looks like my Life was Cut a Little Short, Like your size…” you said as you tried to make humor in this situation, Chuckling softly at your own joke. Ed shook his head quickly, For the first time not actually getting angry for you calling him small, Your breathing slowed as you began to choke on your own blood, Ed held you tightly, Close to him as you breathed your last breaths, His eyes squeezed shut as tears flowed down his face. "I love you..."
Sorry that this is so short. I AM ASHAMED.
I don't own Ed or FMA but the story is tooootally mine.
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meridafair12 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member
I feel sad now!
Vamp104 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad :( ;-; ;A;
AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
Loobloobs45 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 22, 2014  New member
Waaaah! Ooommmgggg soo close to crying it was unbelievable 
Wolfy9wolfy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
Me: *whimpers* I die?! T.T

Ed: I'm NOT going to let that happen!!!! D,:

My friend: awww :( a sad love story... :'(
ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nope listening to depressing music dosen't help :'(
RyuzakiSusanuma Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Artist
And that's when you decide to replace me with Winry huh,You sick son of a bitch Here have your shit 
this is  amazing <3
black-mockingjay Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Photographer
Me: ed.....please I don't want to die.....

Ed: I wont let you *uses alchemy to force blood out of me* * random clapping* I did
It! Fuck yeah Bitches
narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WAAAAAAHH!!! NO! I luv u too! I don't wanna leave!! I wanna marry u and have ur babies, too! I wanna live I a house made by u!! No! I am not gonna die!! (((Lol)))
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