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Life Cut Short
Edward Elric x Reader
Ed held you in his arms, His breathing quick, A trail of blood running down the side of his head down to his neck, Disappearing down his blood stained shirt.
He leaned his head against yours with gritted teeth as he held back his tears,
He was losing you, Fast.
Your half lidded (e/c) eyes look up slowly to meet his Gold ones. You smile as he put a hand on his head weakly as you finally had the air to breathe, It was becoming harder to breathe as the blood slowly started to fill your lungs, you cough a little before managing to speak. “Ed, D-don’t look so sad…It’s no big deal…” you say as he cough again, this time crimson wetness coating the palm of your hand.
He shook his head as a pained look filled his eyes. “No, (Y/n) this is a big deal…I-I can’t lose you…!!!” He cried as he held you closer to him; He wanted to help but…He couldn’t, the closest doctor was miles away, You wouldn’t make it.
Edward Elric and You had been through everything together, You were his friend, His traveling companion (Besides Al), And most of all…His Crush.
He had loved you for what seemed like forever, This was the first time he could hold you in his arms without blushing or nose bleeding...
This was one battle; One mission you weren’t going to finish. The last time you’d see Ed. The Last Time You Would See Life.
You were scared, Scared to die, But you couldn’t let Ed see it…You had to show him you were brave…Show him that there was no reason to cry, Even if there was.
He squeezes his eyes shut as tears well up at the corners of his eyes. “T-this wasn’t supposed to happen…! I-its all my fault…(Y/n) Please fo-forgive me…” He whispered as his face darkened. “I-I love you…I-I always have…We were supposed to get married and have kids, W-we’d live in a big house and d-die there….T-together…!” He cried as he hugged your blushing, Weakening body close to his warm one.
You swallowed down the lump in your throat as you hugged him back, as tears finally dripped down from your own eyes. “I-i…L---“ You cough roughly into your hand. “I love you….Too Ed…Don’t cry…” You pause for a moment as you know your time is running out.
“I’m Sorry…Looks like my Life was Cut a Little Short, Like your size…” you said as you tried to make humor in this situation, Chuckling softly at your own joke. Ed shook his head quickly, For the first time not actually getting angry for you calling him small, Your breathing slowed as you began to choke on your own blood, Ed held you tightly, Close to him as you breathed your last breaths, His eyes squeezed shut as tears flowed down his face. "I love you..."
Sorry that this is so short. I AM ASHAMED.
I don't own Ed or FMA but the story is tooootally mine.
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:iconsomeonefromgalifrey:
SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant  Writer
*refrencing another ed x reader this person did*
haha just kidding! im not dead! I told you I get you back!
his reaction---...WTF? Ed Emote 
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awesomenike Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
Pikachu Crying Plz Pikachu Crying Plz [EXO] Kris ''Legit'' Crying Emoticon Miuna Crying Icon Cry Danisnotonfire: FEELS :FFFFUUUUU: Spam-in-a-Box: NOOO 
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Sachiko-Spardason Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
Danisnotonfire: FEELS the feels :FFFFUUUUU: Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] Cry forever 
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:iconhyebi606:
hyebi606 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
my heart.....it died
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student General Artist
TT_TT The feels... WHY?!
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:iconmoongoddessrein:
MoonGoddessRein Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
The feels!! TT-TT
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:iconmeridafair12:
meridafair12 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
I feel sad now!
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:iconvamp104:
Vamp104 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad :( ;-; ;A;
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:iconangeltheforgottenro:
AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Loobloobs45 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 22, 2014
Waaaah! Ooommmgggg soo close to crying it was unbelievable 
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Wolfy9wolfy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
Me: *whimpers* I die?! T.T

Ed: I'm NOT going to let that happen!!!! D,:

My friend: awww :( a sad love story... :'(
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ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nope listening to depressing music dosen't help :'(
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RyuzakiSusanuma Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Artist
And that's when you decide to replace me with Winry huh,You sick son of a bitch Here have your shit 
this is  amazing <3
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black-mockingjay Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
Me: ed.....please I don't want to die.....

Ed: I wont let you *uses alchemy to force blood out of me* * random clapping* I did
It! Fuck yeah Bitches
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narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcryforeverplz:
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WAAAAAAHH!!! NO! I luv u too! I don't wanna leave!! I wanna marry u and have ur babies, too! I wanna live I a house made by u!! No! I am not gonna die!! (((Lol)))
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CitrusOtakuTea Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Who are you, Mizore?
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:iconfullmetalandcatlover:
FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Heheh I'm cherry it's nice to meet you~! "

The cheerful therapist of the Elric brothers said, wit a happy shine in her voice and face..


((random rp cause I want to:33 lolol)) 

(((Also random, but u should go check out my art.. Lol
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CitrusOtakuTea Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok I go check art
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:iconfullmetalandcatlover:
FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lolol yayy:3
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hahaha, Ed babiez~
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I bet anyone would want to have Ed's kids inside them... Well, any Ed fangirl anyway.... Lol I call it first!!! Lol
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GreytheGreyt Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Student General Artist
They are all very short!!!!
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lololz:33 you got a point:3
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So poetic I love it!!!
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Huh?! You think So? o///o thank you
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Edited Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really loved the part were Edward said,“I-I love you…I-I always have…We were supposed to get married and have kids, W-we’d live in a big house and d-die there….T-together…!” It makes me wanna cwy!Onion Boy 5 onion sad Onion Boy 5 onion sad Onion Boy 5 onion sad 
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you :3
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duckyfangirl8 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
waaaaaa no i cant die eddy needs me D: 
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sword Art Online is a good show, My friend next to me agrees haha :)
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DoruDesux1 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was so beautiful but sad.. Heart 
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks...:3
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DoruDesux1 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome c:
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ilovekid-kun Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Filmographer
Awwwww this is so sweet and sad at the same time (got testy eyed a little) 😖😆😋
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I Hope you liked It~
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thanks for reading~
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ilovekid-kun Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Student Filmographer
No problem I just found it a bit sad but I still loved it
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, Im glad :3
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ilovekid-kun Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Filmographer
I love your icon by the way ITS SO KAWAI
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dragons521 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thank you~
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ilovekid-kun Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student Filmographer
No prob
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Megafangirl77 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
excited  I love this so much
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 Thanks :3
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KittyOzClaw Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Well...um...this was the best thing ever!!!!!1!!!!
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~!
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aurorawolf7 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so sweet, yet so sad! I got all teary-eyed :')
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks? Sorry? xDD
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aurorawolf7 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol it's okay (and I meant it as a good thing lol) XD
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dragons521 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh than thanks~!!!
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aurorawolf7 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yw :D
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